medifors for personification?

youve showed me whats to mold me
aperently ive uncoverd what will kill me
cant change whats already done
i know ive made some horrible mistakes

its a murderer you are
strangled holds too tight
squeez harder tell her eyes roll back
you know shell never fight back
if she tried shed fail misribly

so sweetly you call, as she drinks
trys to hold on tell she dosent bleed
wish she would just stop to think
through the fog of past discrases
mistoufous lives of which weve lead

go hide your terrible faces
eyes of black with tears of ashes
all tied up with the finest laces
blood is pulseing, hands are acking
licked lips waiting to be kissed