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siya rayann and the death twins

“The child wasn’t but four years old when she was orphaned and now that she is an adult someone claims her! Impossible!!!” a boy stood next to a tall man with blonde hair and a sword on his hip.

“Her name is Siya Rayann. Her mother left her when a strange message was left on the child’s wall. There were two messages. If this child is here any longer you will all DIE. Let me take her please.” The boy stepped forward and bowed.

“My name is Mayon. The girl is my half sister and I am her guardian now that I have found her please let me take her away.” The boy bowed again and waited.

“. . . . Fine take the Death girl but be warned she may never return here!” the boy stood and ran out the door that was behind him.

        “Siya. . . Siya come we must leave now!” The boy shouted. A girl with red-brown hair and grey-blue eyes leaned over the side of the wall to his right. “Come Siya we must leave before Stiyla and Rxo leave without us!” the boy then ran to the wall and the girl jumped and landed behind him.

        “Mayon why would I leave my home or are the elders kicking me out?”

        “No they are not but I am your Guardian so u must live with me.” The boy turned to her. “Wouldn’t you like to live with me, Stiyla, and Rxo?” the girl smiled a big smile.

        “Lets go Mayon!” the girl grabbed the boys hand and led him to her room “I must pack my things right?”

        “You don’t have that many things Siya how about we get you some new things when we get to our house you can even pick which room u want.” The boy smiled at her then walked out of the room.

        “Don’t worry father he will join us he loves me to much to leave me he will be my assistant.” Siya laughed and grabbed one of her statues then walked out of the room and to her new life.


‘Death to all his creators.’ “Mama what does this mean? It was on my wall this morning.” ‘Join or die by Rayann’s hand’ “Mama?” the woman stared at the letters of the old. Then looked at the child. “Siya you must stay here. I will get you in 2 weeks. Stay hidden for me. O.K?” tears started down the mothers’ cheek “Yes Mama.” The child went back to playing with her toys.

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Tags: SIYARayann  Added 2008-05-21 06:58:36
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irksome...alot of english is god awful..stop trying to sound archaic if u dun know how. ur pacing is amateuristic...I'll pm you my edited version..and compare. only doing the first 3 paragraphs...want me to do it archaic too? i will if you want meh..i'll do it normally first.

2008-05-21 08:05:01


wow i want to read more

2008-05-21 07:24:56


ok so the pics are of siya the red head the guy is Mayon and the twins are the twins

2008-05-21 07:04:43


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