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oh ok so u guys have read somethings about me now and now u have some of my favorite pics as avatars so now in a few days i'll have a new story for u guys (and girls) to read i hope u guys like it its about a girl who is destined to distry all of gods creators and if u done join her clan u basically die by her hand or someone she chooses to kill u the thing is she's only sixteen when she finds out about her powers if u want this story comment or message three comments or messages and i with give u the story

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Added 2008-05-20 06:41:16
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well u could be atleast a little supportive like saying 'you have wat it take but ur not there yet' kind of then and ur a reall bottom hole when it comes to girls to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2008-05-21 07:06:49


a writer is a perfection..you create through works ans through these words you collect logic. like programming if there is a flaw in within the logic, it will not function as entertaining. you should stop being such a child and acknowledge what i had just said..not the context of what i am saying. if ur not improving then the comments will be of the same nature...and since ur saying "i'm always"...the ur always not improving...most likely because you're tantrumming like a child and not listening to the advice.

2008-05-20 08:38:29


its just a story dude and if u like it then u like it but it is still just a story in progress and i like how every thing i write ur the first to comment and it is allways something bad thats a big selfesteem point

2008-05-20 07:59:18


if the gods had creators then the gods in essence are not gods..but highly powerful beings..(god-like at best)..and the creators are the gods...as for the join or die concept...thats nothing new..what twist will be the hook? i mean y is she the one? y should ppl join her?..the simple fear of death isn't much..i mean early christians threw away their lives because they believed in heaven...

2008-05-20 07:47:46


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