So cute!!!!!!

BSR6653

09.18.2009 12:00 AM

Congratulations to the authors, i very happy, is great and funny.

ZENPAI

08.13.2009 12:00 AM

I really enojoyed it, congratulations to the authors. I found it really entertaining, the plot's funny and flows easily. It's a really humorous manga, I really liked the gags. Though in my opinion,the story'd be a little predictable and I could'nt get exactly why Mary wanted to be a pirate in first place. About the art, it's good not to see just a copy of someone's manga style, I mean, it's original. Tones are very well used, but i'd liked to see more wide shots.

MONTIZ

07.06.2009 12:00 AM

you know what....this my friend is great, you havent tried to copy anything, its original, humourous and you've captured cute and crazy perfectly. good dialouge, good pacing, no cliches (well no manga cliches), very refreshing and a pilot worth reading. if theres one downside to this its that its just not serious enough, i cant see where its going but you can prove me wrong. anyway its good hope to see it published

SCREWZ07

02.15.2009 12:00 AM

Beppo! this wasnt a flipping essay assignment. why such a deep analysis. got to say im envious of your analytical skills i could really use them for my english exams coming up soon. oh well

SCREWZ07

02.15.2009 12:00 AM

apperence vs reality? you must have studied english at A-level or higher maybe you could teach me a thing or two Beppo

SCREWZ07

02.15.2009 12:00 AM

Love this lots

ALOFA

02.12.2009 12:00 AM

I like this story, it's very interesting. You can't get enough comedy in your life, that's what I always say.

ZARIKA

11.24.2008 12:00 AM

Wow! This was great! Original characters, witty and original dialouge, successful characterisation and humour that actually works. A really, REALLY awesome change from the terrible s*** that I've seen among the majority of pilots. Lots of other's have tried for cute and zanny and failed horribly. Thank you so much for such a fun and interesting read! I seriously hope you get picked up!

NATSUKI89

09.23.2008 12:00 AM

I do NOT like the new manga players on the beta site. the only reason to post manga on this site was because of the manga players. they made it feel like you had "published" a book without the cost. these new players are a) unreadable- in small size. b)- unusable- I cannot no matter how I try get the players to enlarge... might be because of my slow connection but still... the programers should have taken those of us who can't afford faster connections into consideration. if I had wanted to have my art in a "video" format I would have uploaded to youtube where I could enlarge the art to full screen so I could actually read it without freezing my computer. bring the old players back please... don't fix what isn't broken!!!!!

PHEONIA

08.29.2008 12:00 AM

I do NOT like the new manga players on the beta site. the only reason to post manga on this site was because of the manga players. they made it feel like you had "published" a book without the cost. these new players are a) unreadable- in small size. b)- unusable- I cannot no matter how I try get the players to enlarge... might be because of my slow connection but still... the programers should have taken those of us who can't afford faster connections into consideration. if I had wanted to have my art in a "video" format I would have uploaded to youtube where I could enlarge the art to full screen so I could actually read it without freezing my computer. bring the old players back please... don't fix what isn't broken!!!!!

PHEONIA

08.29.2008 12:00 AM

I do NOT like the new manga players on the beta site. the only reason to post manga on this site was because of the manga players. they made it feel like you had "published" a book without the cost. these new players are a) unreadable- in small size. b)- unusable- I cannot no matter how I try get the players to enlarge... might be because of my slow connection but still... the programers should have taken those of us who can't afford faster connections into consideration. if I had wanted to have my art in a "video" format I would have uploaded to youtube where I could enlarge the art to full screen so I could actually read it without freezing my computer. bring the old players back please... don't fix what isn't broken!!!!!

PHEONIA

08.29.2008 12:00 AM

I do NOT like the new manga players on the beta site. the only reason to post manga on this site was because of the manga players. they made it feel like you had "published" a book without the cost. these new players are a) unreadable- in small size. b)- unusable- I cannot no matter how I try get the players to enlarge... might be because of my slow connection but still... the programers should have taken those of us who can't afford faster connections into consideration. if I had wanted to have my art in a "video" format I would have uploaded to youtube where I could enlarge the art to full screen so I could actually read it without freezing my computer. bring the old players back please... don't fix what isn't broken!!!!!

PHEONIA

08.29.2008 12:00 AM

hahaha!!! it was pretty funny. if it was in the book...i think i might buy it.

MACHI

08.24.2008 12:00 AM

hahaha!!! it was pretty funny. if it was in the book store...i think i might buy it.

MACHI

08.24.2008 12:00 AM

I love the characters in this story.

FAINTLYMACABRE

08.22.2008 12:00 AM

this is so cute!!! i wouldn't necessarily pick up something like this, but something about it just makes me want to read more--- makes me think of my imagination as a child :D i always wanted to be like Marie, but i'm really more like Molly...

RYAVEN

08.22.2008 12:00 AM

Where is the comic >......< It won't load

RYAVEN

08.18.2008 12:00 AM

It is too childish for my tastes but likely would do well with a readership of ages 7 to 10 years of age. The art suits the story however some fine tuning on the ears would definitely be recommended.

HARUHI13007

08.14.2008 12:00 AM

Story: Its sooo cute. I love this story. It truly is such a kids fantasy. I like where the story was taking you. In fact, I like it so much that I would buy the set for my kid.

KANDI8584

08.13.2008 12:00 AM

Art: The art fit the story. But some fine tuning will do it some good.

KANDI8584

08.13.2008 12:00 AM

I love this it was very funny, and a fresh story in a great sense.

ELDORA

08.13.2008 12:00 AM

While I personally did not enjoy this as much as other manga. When I showed it to my little bro he found it quite funny. So I would say it would definitely sell among kids

PINUTI

08.13.2008 12:00 AM

i really liked it. i would love to read more.

ANIMEQUEEN123

08.10.2008 12:00 AM

Very cute premise. It reminds me a lot of my little sister (except for the whole fairy godmother thing) and it seems like the type of manga she's into. This looks like a great manga for young children getting introduced to manga. It's light, funny, and imaginative. I know a lot of kids who would want a manga like this.

LIGHTONHERFEET

08.04.2008 12:00 AM

Surprisingly I enjoyed this! Don't think it's something I'd go to great lengths to follow, as it's just too cutesy for my taste. I would have it in my classroom though, I think it would be enjoyable and suitable for my 5th grade students. The basic idea is clever, and the characters very engaging. Only criticism is it's a bit hard on the eyes- too much grey, not enough contrast maybe?

YAMINOSENSEI

08.03.2008 12:00 AM

wat

CHEMMY

07.31.2008 12:00 AM

This is a very cute manga. The only thing I'd have to criticize is a bit of the beginning being fast paced, and ill-explained. I love the sense of humour that's seen in the manga, and it's got a bit of a childish heir to it, and I love that! Good luck!

8SCOUT8

07.25.2008 12:00 AM

I have to say that i really enjoyed this manga. I would buy the book if it came out. Its very heartwarming and funny. :D

SAKURAHONDA

07.23.2008 12:00 AM

very fun just that it cuts off in the bottom which kind of sucks but very nice and light-hearted

BUNNY1

07.09.2008 12:00 AM

I love the art. Its a lot better than other pilots I've read. ^^

RICEXCRISPY

07.04.2008 12:00 AM

The way this graphic novel is written is suited for children and people who don't really like a lot of drama or conflicts in the graphic novels.

FASTREAD

06.29.2008 12:00 AM

The art was too light-hearted for my tastes... I'm not really into comedy... I wouldn't buy it, but I know some people who would.

JONIGIRL924

06.27.2008 12:00 AM

This graphic novel I suppose will be able to be sold to the younger generation and light hearted readers only. But the storyline isn't very serious so I probably won't buy it. The aren't is not bad but there is too much grey and it tend to get confusing and unclear. This manga is something people would download through the internet rather than actually buying it to read.

OCEANWHISPER

06.24.2008 12:00 AM

With its taste of childish innocence and the elegant premise of living out a dream, the story has a homey feel to it, making it a perfect easy read and a simple pleasure at the end of a long, hard day. Having the fairygodmother deal gives the story unlimited bounds and room for taking the plot anywhere the author wants it to go. The characters are realistic with great personality while at the same time remaining quirky and, in the sheep's case, inhuman. It seems this story-skeleton has enough muscle to go somewhere great. It reminded me of drinking hot coco on a rainy day while listening to fairytales: smooth, warm, and comforting.

RAVENCARTEL13

06.23.2008 12:00 AM

The storyline is probably great, but once more ...it's too busy. The jumble up of varies things make it looked kind of crowd, and not really interested in reading. I am beginning to want to blame the program that is being used to tone and add words to this story. It looks dull, and the coversheet ...needs the name of the manga on it. What do people have against do that on here?

SILENTVEIL

06.22.2008 12:00 AM

I absolutely loved this! I thought the story was and artwork was so cute and creatively expressed. The story type and art style fit together well, which they should. This made me laugh a lot. I would definitely buy this! In fact, I want to see chapter 2 now! The only problem I had with it was the title....maybe change that. Other than that it was wonderful. Hear that tokyopop? Publish it! haha

DARLINGOJAMAJO

06.19.2008 12:00 AM

The sheep char cracked me up! I like the simple premise, and the light flexible style. And the way she drew sheep. Baaa. It's a fun, laughable read. I look forward to more! ...the title is kinda' silly though. 4/5

DIGIPHANTOM

06.18.2008 12:00 AM

The story like was cute and it reminded me of what you would find in an online comic. I wasn't too interested in it though and found myself skimming through it.

DRAGONFIRERED

06.17.2008 12:00 AM

not bad but funny!

BAKACAROL

06.17.2008 12:00 AM

um..... i hate to sound harsh....but the art made me so uninterested, that i actually stopped reading it. im not gonna say anything about the story tho. SIGH! im so sorry if i sounded mean

SWEETZ

06.16.2008 12:00 AM

This is not a story meant for the art work, in fact, the art work goes with the mood of the story. I hate to be harsh to the previous commenters, but artwork in a manga, or any other graphic novel type of art, should reflect its purpose/ambiance. The comedic aspect of the story is great for younger people, or older people who just want a little relaxation time that doesn't require any thinking. The characterization is superb, I must say. Masculine Evangelina, bi-polar Molly, and the ultimate child that will not destroy the world with her godmother (or will she?), Marie, make the comic aspect of the story very care-free and befitting. Nevertheless, I loved it, and in comparison to the other pilots, this story has virtually no mistakes (for they are meant to be intentional, obviously)! 5/5 for attention to detail, befitting characterization, artwork, mood, and simply because of it's crazy appeal to all ages.

EPHRAIMSOL

06.16.2008 12:00 AM

I love it!!!!5/5!

1SAKURACHAN

06.15.2008 12:00 AM

I don't like the art work.... sorry.

SANXIU

06.15.2008 12:00 AM

this was a cute story with fun art (although the fairy godmother was a bit masculine). I think younger readers will love this. I do agree that the title is kinda boring.

BLUESEASHELL3

06.15.2008 12:00 AM

Didn't like the art, general storyline or the title but I think it would be okay for younger readers......

YRUAHIPPO

06.14.2008 12:00 AM

To be honest, the art was less than pleasing and I didn't like the title. But the story was cute and a few parts made me laugh.

KOBAKOBA

06.14.2008 12:00 AM

This was cute and funny! I also liked the art! I don't like the front cover and the title isn't the best ever, but I would definately read this. Again, cute and funny are the best words that I can find to describe it. I'd like to see what happens next!

RISACHAN

06.14.2008 12:00 AM

It's so adorable, the art plays in well to the main character being a kid very soft and happy. The storie is funny, I would read it again

DRAGONLADYWEST

06.14.2008 12:00 AM

its really funny and seems to be a lot of fun to read. many comics rarely make me laugh and i love the ones that do.

SOUTHWITCH

06.13.2008 12:00 AM