Great Story and Graphics
Easy to read story that has attention to detail, yet is simplistically elegant with undertones of comedic relief that are a breath of fresh air. Nice change of pace reads like a professional publication. I am impressed with the quality. Surely this author/artist has been published?!
PILOT SYNOPSIS
A pretty fifteen-year old girl
who lives on the rural planet called Nashira living by sweet and precious memories
from her dear parents. She lives alone living each day in a routine by taking
care of her home and her garden. One night, her life drastically changes when a
small space shuttle crash lands in her precious garden and into her kitchen!
Unexpectedly, she finds a baby named and what looks to be his pet named Aki.
Aries, who is actually a prince from Ankaa, who was sent away by his parents to
protect him from an enemy who is after him and to make him “grow up”…he is
really seventeen-years old! His age was reversed to disguise him against his
wishes and sent him far away. Never in her wildest dreams did she anticipate a
seventeen-year old prince to crash into her life and begin growing special
feelings into her lonely heart!
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Taara
A fifteen-year old girl lives on a rural planet that harbors her precious
memories from her parents. She lives each day with a smile on her face, and
talking to herself often! She loves cooking in her kitchen with a picture of
her dear parents and loves to tend her precious garden! When she meets Aries as
a child, she sees an opportunity to love someone, taking on the role as a
mother-like figure. But when she finds he is under a spell and that he is
really a seventeen year old prince, she suddenly changes her view and the way
she acts around him!
Aries
Aries is a handsome seventeen years old prince from the planet Ankaa of the
powerful empire Zakir. As for certain princely features he is also a rebellious
and stubborn teenager! Also, he is resentful and bitter that his brother has
gone and now he has to take over the role of king someday. He wants to be free
from obligations at the palace that subdue his freedom. When he is sent away he
becomes even more resentful that his parents sent him away in the first place!
But when he crash lands into Taara’s world, he discovers that his age has been
reversed and that he has to learn to grow up all over again!
Aki
Aki is one of Aries close friends and adviser, whose age is unknown since his
kind can live for years. His true form looks that of a cat but he also can turn
into a human and look about the same age as Aries. He is actually a manipulator
and a sarcastic being that loves teasing Aries when situations come up between
Aries and Taara.
CREATOR’S INTRODUCTION
Don’t wake Kari! While you may
think she’s just snoozing, she’s really on a quest for a new tale! Kari lives to dream. Most of the stories she writes are
derived from the dreams she has had…other than from her usual waking activities,
like saving the world from being overrun by demons! She weaves her dreams into
a sweet romance with hints of adventure and comedy. Every character reveals
bits of her personality. She reads all types of manga constantly to feed her
imagination with characters and stories that will eventually spark something in
her subconscious while honing her world-class professional sleeping skills!
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I agree can't wait to read the rest. I love that it's so funny and that little twist was the icing on the cake.
DEATHNOTEFORCUTIE
10.03.2009 12:00 AM
SHOJO!!!!!! I love shojo! The Aries has the perfect personality for his position in the story! I wanna buy this. When's the next chapter!
ALISAAMANE
09.29.2009 12:00 AM
This is OH-SO-TYPICAL shojo manga--but I LOVE it! This is the type of guilty-pleasure manga that I eat up. Sure, it might not have the best art and grammar. Sure, it's full of cliches and plot holes (Where'd that talking cat come from? Why didn't Taara try to find the baby's parents? HOW could Taara leave the baby unsupervised in the bathtub?!), but, despite everything, this brought a smile to my face. I love shojo! I'd totally buy this! Oh, and is anyone else confused by the "Editor's Intro"? I don't think it's the same story...
SKATORA
09.15.2009 12:00 AM
wow that was good, but i just realized something about the comic's theme. It is almost just like Meri Puri.
ANIYMAY
09.10.2009 12:00 AM
This looks just like Meru Puri
KITTEH
07.26.2009 12:00 AM
great art, it does look like a professional manga. About the story,i enjoyed reading it,it's funny, though i don't think it's very original. Anyway, it's just chapter one, if this story gives us unexpected twists, it'll get very interesting.
MONTIZ
07.10.2009 12:00 AM
This is a really awesome comic I wish owned it because I would read it every day of my life
NILLAFERN
07.07.2009 12:00 AM
This idea has been used before. Unless there's a twist it'll be nearly the same. But the grammar made me wince, it was horrific. I do like the artwork though.
DARKFAIRYPHOBOS
06.26.2009 12:00 AM
The grammer was, well, bad,and the pacing was choppy, leaving the story with a "cut and paste" feel which got confusing. The scenes where Aries and his 'pet' were talking around her before she had her freak out over the 'pet' talking left me wondering way too early why she wasn't freaked out then, so I was left to assume that they were either talking quietly amongst themselves just out of her hearing range or that you had not yet caught the irregularity. I like the story, the heroine seems quite cute and likable and aries is interesting, I would like very much to read more but after some clean up. It would be beneficial to have someone do a read through, add notes, and perhaps edit for you so that the story flows better. I imagine that you did all of this on your own and I am impressed with your art and the tone work you did. The dialogue lost me at times and like I said, having someone else read it would help a lot because they will be seeing it with fresh eyes and can catch things you would not notice. I do it and it is a tremendous help. I hope this has been beneficial to you.
THEPAPER
06.21.2009 12:00 AM
very cute
YAZZORLET
06.17.2009 12:00 AM
That was really really good i want to read more of them
YAZZORLET
06.02.2009 12:00 AM
This was absolutly wonderful. I love the idea. it's so adorable! And Aries is very handsome =3 And the heroin Taara has an air of mothering around her. The artwork is amazing, as well. And there is a rich balance of tones along with blacks and whites. The only thing I would say is just to go back and touch up spelling. But other than that I would definatly buy this book off the shelf. Keep up the amazing work =3
0MIZUCHAN0
04.27.2009 12:00 AM
wow that was really good I want to read more!
VAMPIREKARA1
04.23.2009 12:00 AM
sweet watashi wish the full manga was on here though.
RAKKAPOTTER
04.22.2009 12:00 AM
the talking was a bit bit weird like the spelling but i'm not from america so.... the art was kay i've seen better but still good i liked the cartoons funny but yea.
AYANECHAN
04.17.2009 12:00 AM
What a cute story! I would love to read more!
DIZZYDESICHICA
04.17.2009 12:00 AM
This is cute. I can see this making it as an anime as well.
CWFRITZ
04.16.2009 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful and beautifully :) Parabens pelo otimo trabalho é lindo
42NATO
04.05.2009 12:00 AM
Wow this is awesome ! ! I would definately buy this ! I need to read more ! The art is fabulous and it's such a unique concept ! I shall pre-order ^^
SENTOKI
04.02.2009 12:00 AM
xDDDD I want to see this as a full manga and hopefully and anime!!! SOOO KAWAII!! The art is great, the story is awesome and I would def buy this. I love it ^^
KITKATTWIZZLER
03.30.2009 12:00 AM
omg! tht was awesome! really funny! ^_^ really hope u continue making it!
CHERRYGIRL2475
03.30.2009 12:00 AM
So funny I Love it
XXDARKERWATERXX
03.14.2009 12:00 AM
adorable, funny! cute! I would have spent more time on the introduction of the universe, because it spun too fast. artwork is beautiful, wonderful toning too
SOFICO1989
03.04.2009 12:00 AM
I think the art is great, but this is pretty much a copy of Meru Puri. The writing has it's own flavor though... Maybe the story after this pilot is completely different than Meru Puri ( I can't say since I haven't seen it ) If it is different, then you should change this beginning part... If you're going to go with the trying to grow up thing and reverting back when acting childish that could go somewhere, but get rid of the whole prince being sent away from danger or something... Also I think the character designs would need to be altered to avoid comparison to Meru Puri. I hope you take this as constructive criticism, Goodluck! :)
HARMONY
03.02.2009 12:00 AM
There were spellings mistakes and words added that shouldn't have been, words missing...but it wasn't bad! Although I think the ship crashed in too fast, and we don't know anything about her parents, I really like this manga and would buy it if the mistakes were changed and other things. Well done!
GIGGLESGOTH
02.16.2009 12:00 AM
I liked it, though it did remind me of Meru Puri by Masturi Hino alittle bit. But it was good. :)
AYUGIRL4
01.31.2009 12:00 AM
The story went very fast for my tastes, and I found a typo or two. I like the art, but the transitions need to be worked on... I felt like I was being jerked around. Also, it's too much like Meru Puri; at least the first part is. :|
ZEPYSGIRL
01.16.2009 12:00 AM
The artwork's great-excellent toning skills. But the story's almost identical to Hino's MeruPeri manga. I mean, even the heroines look similar! I'd like to see more of the comic to see how it separates itself from Hino's work, however, if I saw it in a store I wouldn't buy it since I already have MeruPeri.
ELLENNATALIE
01.15.2009 12:00 AM
art kinda reminded me of vampire knight at the beginning... which was totally awesome. and the main chick is kinda like the personality of tohru in a way. the chibis are TOTALLY ADORABLE!!! the star bounces off her head!!! XD [page 10 frame 5]
CRAZEDMANGACHIK
01.05.2009 12:00 AM
Awsome! This is a great story and if any Manga Pilot should be publised it should be this one! I luv Shojo Manga and this is shojo manga and there needs to be alot more shojo out there! So keep up the good ones (shojo) and trash the bad ones(shonen) because violent manga is bad! Way to go Veritas Kiss !
WARREN001
01.03.2009 12:00 AM
I Loved this it was so cool and very cute!!!
SHIBIEN11
01.02.2009 12:00 AM
it was the cutest thing i have seen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JUSTMYLUCK21
01.02.2009 12:00 AM
ok..toooooo ccuuuttteee.....>>>
RYNEGADE
01.01.2009 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! Can't wait to read more!!
LOVEBUG18
12.29.2008 12:00 AM
i just love this manga i need more of if
HELLOPAPER7896
12.18.2008 12:00 AM
what a cute manga one of the new ones i will read. wonder what will happen after he is all grown up.
TORUXKYO
12.13.2008 12:00 AM
what a cute manga :) one of the new ones i will read. wonder what will happen after he grows up. would he have the same aditude?
TORUXKYO
12.13.2008 12:00 AM
I love that kind of manga. Fine work.
RATEIOSU
12.12.2008 12:00 AM
I am sorry, but am I the only one who finds that the story is a replica of Hino Matsuri's Meru Puri?... Personnaly, I find it disturbing when a creator replicates another's work - being inspires by others is one thing, but there is a fine line between that and a copycat. Sorry.
TACTO
12.03.2008 12:00 AM
really good i would definetly buy it. very good art!!
ANIMEQUEEN123
11.22.2008 12:00 AM
This is definitely a manga that I'd pick up and buy in a store! Good Job!
HEAVENLYHELL
11.07.2008 12:00 AM
not bad i really like the art but the story is a little jumpy and sometimes doesnt make sense. but overall very well done.
HELLPAINTERGX
10.23.2008 12:00 AM
Oh I like this one it be a top buy for me. x3 and that drawing of the prince on the 3 page as a teen whoo he can land in my kitchen/garden anyday :)
ELDORA
10.23.2008 12:00 AM
really love the artwork, and a very funny storyline. it has alot of potentinal, though it reminds me of other manga titles, it still has quite a large sense of originality.
TSTAR
10.22.2008 12:00 AM
The artwork was good, very nice toning and line art and such, but the plot was a bit weak and there could have been a better use of grammar. All in all, I think with some refinement this comic could have a lot of potential.
RYAVEN
10.19.2008 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful, beautifully drawn, and very well written series. I would love to see more of it! If this was a comic book it would be at the top of my list for puchasing!
WOOLFCUB
10.17.2008 12:00 AM
it's so cute and I love the art, but the plot seems too much like Meru Puri. >3< but I love it anyway
ILOSTMYHEART
10.12.2008 12:00 AM
love it when is the next one going to be up? soon???
VIRGINIAT1984
10.10.2008 12:00 AM
Great story! Would buy this :)
NIGHTINGALE
10.03.2008 12:00 AM
Até que enfim saiu, né? >D Ficou mto bom, espero que saia logo o próximo capitulo! Traço super fofito (fofo e bonito!)
VIAJANTELINK
09.29.2008 12:00 AM