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The Key

Love me for who I am
nothing more.
I will return it with a gift--
the key to unlock a door.
Take good care of it with
gentleness and trust
Compassion and patience for
one another is a must
Treasure this gift , handle it
with care
for cruelty and hate will cause
it to tear.
This key is to my heart
so be gentle and kind.
Inside is joy,
love and peace is what you will find.
Nothing more nothing less is what I offer
to you this day.
Open up my heart and I will love
you always


This was, like, the second poem i ever wrote, about two years ago. please comment...i know its different, my style changes a lot. i found this while cleaning up my room, it was stuffed in a cabinet

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Added 2008-07-16 11:32:13
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i agree with alexanderzala... it is from a diff point of view.. but still its just as meaningful...

2008-08-30 11:00:07


Quite different from your other poems...but not bad.

2008-07-20 23:06:21


cool.

2008-07-16 11:43:55


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