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The clock is ticking..

I look down..
falling down to the ground
no matter what I do, I cant confiss you..
Suddenly I see it all 'round.

This is a test,
where did I go wrong?
the clock is ticking
I cant stand this for long.

I try to get up,
but these chains wont let me.
they burn my skin...
killing me slowly, cant you see?

this is a test,
I dunnoh what to do..
the clock is ticking
taking me slowly away from you

Its getting dark,
I'm loosing my breath..
come here, finish me off
let me finally face my death.

This was a test,
I wonder how..
The clock stops ticking,
it's all over now..


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Tags: poem  Added 2007-07-18 07:27:13
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It's nice and sounds kinda dark.

2007-07-18 19:02:30


why does this sounds like a suicide poem

2007-07-18 11:06:37


that was good kinda weird but good!

2007-07-18 07:44:31


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