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,:Back To The Past:.

When I think about the past
I wonder I why I always came in last
I was left alone, which was alright
But there were times I couldn't sleep at night
Thinking again and again, why I'm even alive
And the reasons why I feel so deprived
Theirs times I wish I could back then
Back to the time when I actually had friends
Back to the time when my parents were together
Into the time when it was nothing but sunny weather
But that is a wish that will never come true
And now all thats left is memories of you.


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Tags: poetry,poem,past,leanna  Added 2007-10-17 09:56:01
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um, which line are u talking about?

2007-10-22 05:19:14


Another good one. Short but very sweet. 1 question though. In the last line, re you referring to somebody particular? Or is just like a statement? (statement might be the wrong word)

2007-10-19 22:36:41


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