Hey there, what a neat manga!
I enjoyed it to say the least, but to get to the part you'll probably want to hear i'll push on...

Crit:

The panels could be alittle more dynamic. They're currently not bad, but variation would add alot IMO

A little technique that i think would benefit you well would be the size of character variation. A little thing i've picked up in the last month or so would be to not put similar size characters in similar size panels. By doing this you get an unquestionable sense of profesionalism thats otherwise very hard to achieve. This is just a suggestion that i think would suit your style well though, no need to take it too seriously. :)

Good luck in the next RSoM UK btw, i'm entering too. I entered last year and scraped the finalists (it was quite a fluke) but this year i've worked hard to improve. I look back at my old entry and i gag!

Ganbatte!~ and keep up the hard work!