LOGO

Him

I choose this blue ink to symbol water
Water that is my tears
I'm lost and confused
left all alone
I had some one who could make me smile
A person who could make me laugh
One that could cheer me up
One that wouldn't bring me down.
But along the way my paranoia got the best.
I began to misread them
Think them a lier.
Doubt their words...
I'm all i lost faith...
But i don't think it was in him
It was lost in me
I didn't think it could be real.
But it was...
Now Ive ruined the best thing to ever happen in my life
I bid him adeu and sit back and watch..


How i feel about a certain person

VIEWS: 76
POPS:
2
REVIEWS:
0
CLIPS:
0
COMMENTS:
2
AVG RATING:
0.0
0.0
ART:
0.0
0.0
STORY:
0.0
0.0

Item is currently Untagged

 Added 2008-09-27 13:39:54
Add Comments
Comments by members require the content creator's approval before they are displayed.

 

Only registered members can post comments


     

Comments

ur good,i really like it and ur choice of words its great ^^ *applause*

DANIEL953


2008-12-03 12:32:37


uhuO___O let's see now i think ur "lier" is supposed to be "liar" "Doubt their words" , "the best thing to ever happen..." , and "adeu" (i think)

BLUESORROW


2008-11-18 16:38:30


User Reviews
There are currently no reviews. To review, click on the review link underneath the content.

Avatar
  • flag
  • POPS: 2
  • PROFILE VIEWS: 76
  • FANS: 234
  • CLANS: 291
  • GENDER: PRIVATE
  • LOCATION: USA